author-first formulation for Perrone
Based on your clarification, I would not write that Perrone says abolition itself did “more than” legal termination.
I would formulate her point as:
Giuliana Perrone (2023) argues that the formal abolition of slavery did not automatically eliminate the social and institutional legacies of slavery; these legacies continued to shape the lives and freedom of formerly enslaved African Americans after emancipation.
The logical structure is:
Perrone's claim:
formal abolition occurred.
But:
its social consequences were not automatically erased.
So you're not saying:
abolition legally did X + socially did Y.
You're saying:
abolition legally did X, but legal abolition did not automatically eliminate what slavery had already produced socially and institutionally.
That distinction is essential.
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